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DAMB Haikus!!! Reply to this Post Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Posts Report Post to a Moderator       Go to the top of this page

I pilfered this thread
From another message board
It’s the Haiku Thread

‘What’s Haiku?’ you ask
It is syllabic verses
Of five-seven-five;

The first verse has five
The second verse has seven
The third verse has five

Communicating
In any other manner
Is prohibited

Since this forum is
All about the great DA
Let’s haiku their works

The ‘Darn Floor Big Bite’
Album is my favourite
An amazing work!

From start to finish
The melodies and lyrics
Are immaculate

Terry Scott Taylor
Reaches deep into his soul
Some of his best work

The opening song,
'Return Of The Beat Menace',
Is very trippy;

Eskimos with hair
Like girls from Mississippi?
That is very strange!

That’s a nice segue
Into track numero dos;
It’s ‘Strange Animals’

I’m paraphrasing
‘You are one strange animal,
And I am one, too’

The title-track’s next;
‘Darn Floor Big Bite’…inspired
By primate’s signing

God says ‘Describe Me’
A Roaring Lion and a
Consuming fire

Next up we have the
Very serene ‘Earth Household’
I listen and float

Gravity cannot
Keep us down eternally
One day we will fly

Next is track cuatro
‘Safety Net’ is God’s grace and
Protection for us

The following line,
‘Down to the black bridge of sighs’,
Is very profound

Next is track cinco
It’s ‘Pictures Of The Gone World’
Sadly nostalgic

Making love to you
I am holding on to you
We’ll lose this world, too

The next number is
The awesome ‘Divine Instant’
It is amazing!

Think about this one…
This song could be a soundtrack
For man-wife coitus!

After this is the
Great ‘Half Light, Epoch, And Phase’
A DA classic!

I love the chorus…
…dark glass darkly…tattoo scars…
…faith and doubt remain…

Another classic,
‘The Unattainable Earth’
Is the next number

What has God revealed?
Do we misunderstand it?
Earth too huge to grasp

And then the last song…
What a profound piece of work!!!
It’s ‘The Shape Of Air’

I love this lyric;
‘…a world where nets catch the wind…’
I can sit and stare…

And that’s that, my friends
DA, SE, TST
Bring on the Haikus!


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Ghosssssttttteeeee, God doesn't
LIKE alternative Christian
paganesque poetry!

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I like haiku yeah
It speaks to me my friend yeah
And makes me think yeah

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quote:
Originally posted by Goliath
Ghosssssttttteeeee, God doesn't
LIKE alternative Christian
paganesque poetry!


Unfortunately
Your 'paganesque poetry'
Line is much too long



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quote:
Originally posted by dorfsmith
I like haiku


Well then please haiku
Remember; the only way
To speak is Haiku

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quote:
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quote:
Originally posted by Goliath
Ghosssssttttteeeee, God doesn't
LIKE alternative Christian
paganesque poetry!

Unfortunately
Your 'paganesque poetry'
Line is much too long

Since God doesn't LIIIIIIIIIIIKE
it anyway, He doesn't
CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARE if I mess it














































up.

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Hey! This ain't the Yard! Mad

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quote:
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Hey! This ain't the Yard! Mad


Forgive me, Doctor,
But I don't know what you mean;
"Hey! This ain't the Yard!"

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Goliath is much troubled
by foreign verses
What is said about old dogs?
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quote:
Originally posted by baxter
Goliath is much troubled
by foreign verses
What is said about old dogs?


hey that was seven,
followed by another five.
you got it backwards.

i wil pick my fave.
Shotgun Angel would be it.
i'm as old as "...Gold..."
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Baxter and numbers
A dreadful combination
Like Hillary and
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quote:
Originally posted by baxter
Baxter and numbers
A dreadful combination
Like Hillary and...


...Bill Clinton was just
featured on a quarter on
Conan O'Brien


Tongue

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Would not Conan need
At least a Kennedy half
For that great, fat ass?
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quote:
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Would not Conan need
At least a Kennedy half
For that great, fat ass?


Well, if you must ask,
Don't say I didn't warn you
Then click on this line

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God help us! When will i learn to heed warnings?



Stars get in my eyes
Remember Sanctuary
Greatest fears dissolve
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Space Ghost does not want
The cool Haiku thread to die
Thus, this haiku post

Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

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Clever is Space Ghost
An emticon haiku
the first of its kind?
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quote:
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Clever is Space Ghost
An emticon haiku
the first of its kind?


'May hap so,'is what
Abigail Freemantle would
say if she answered

Big Grin

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what would a Henry Rollins haiku sound like, Space Ghost?
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